Frothing at the Mouth
It infuriates me
And froths my mouth
That pushy bull, “Bethel-A-hole,”
Corralled me into her “pen”
To write for her “pad” —
Her newsletter, that is!
Then tried to whiplash me
Into my own automobile,
To further wrap
The noose about my neck,
Then squeeze it —
She’s another hornet like Irit —
I can’t take such shit!
Betsy-boots, who roota-toot-toots
Her own flutes and horn,
Is another controller like them —
Another old hen full of “corn.”
Let’s nip the wings of the Royal B’s —
Clip them down to size.
Whoever succeeds at this enterprise
Should certainly win first prize!
Talk about self expression and growth! Good job!
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Thanks Jessica, for taking the time to leave a comment. But I was surprised it was on this poem of all poems. For I thought it was probably too negative to post. However, at this point, I am just posting whatever I finally get edited as I go along in my poetry notebooks. I’ll have to go back and weed things out as time goes by, after I give more distance to what I’ve done, so I can judge from a better perspective.
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Yeah it is negative. I guess that spells progress like you are doing what you are doing getting things moving good or bad like your other poem sais.
I’m just in a non writing silent mood barly keeping up with my daily post at the moment.
I try to read all your stuff even if I don’t comment. Hugs
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Jessica, I appreciate your feedback. Sorry to hear you are not feeling at your best. Give me a call if you would like to talk. Meanwhile, I wish you all the best in your writing and the positive efforts to contribute to the world and creativity.
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PS: I forgot to say that your observations in your comments are so deep and wise, as always. I have hundreds of poems to edit, and wonder if I should skip through and try to find the best ones, rather than take each poem as I run into it.
Time doesn’t really allow for me to edit and publish all my poems, I suspect. I also suspect I should only post my best ones, if only because many people will only read one to three of my posts. If they read the ones that I know are not my best, then that’s all they will know of my writing and me. But that’s how it goes.
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